Tuesday, 29 March 2016

My perfect room

I take one step into my room and I feel my soft rug rub against my foot.
I spot my bright chair rocking gently at the corner of my eye.
My calm bed lies on the ground. 
My exciting Painting surround me
My bright light dangles overtop of me like a big bird.
That is my special place.
By Mia 


  1. I love it but I would like it more if you used the word my less.

  2. Great pice of writing.Love the first and second sentence.