Tuesday, 31 May 2016

Hanmer springs hot pools

We all stumble to the bag area and the lifeguards tells us all of the pool safety rules.
We enter
The protective lifeguards guard the pools keeping people safe.
The drifting lazy river drags people around and around.
The deep pool is overflowing with advanced swimmers.
The full water bucket tips then “SPLASH” we all 
Get soaked.
The boiling hot pools bubble.
And the naked changing room smells of chlorine.

By Mia

1 comment:

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